Сочинение о России по этим данным, много надо

Helen: Hello! This as Helen speaking.
Cani speak to Mag

Mag's mother: I'm sorry, Helen. She isn`t in.
She is in the park.
Helen:___ may I come to meet her?
Mag's mother: Of course, you may. She'll be at home at 6 pm.
Helen: good bye
Mag's mother: Bye 

ти сам составил этот диалог ? если да то напиши лучше этот
Helen: Hello! This is Helen , can i speak to Mag .
Mag's mother: I'm sorry, Helen ,but she isn't at home .
She is in the park.
Helen: can I come to meet her?
Mag's mother: Of course, you can . She will be at home at 6 pm.
Helen: good bye
Mag's mother: Bye

As any person I have some merits and demerits (достоинства и недостатки)

1. I am a pupil of 8th form and I have a lot of lessons at school every day. My school day finishes at half past 2 but then I have to go to the art school.Usually  I return home at 6 or 7 o*clock in the evening I don*t have enough time to walk. I do my homework till night. Sometimes i HAVE TO WRITE COMPOSITIONS or reports till 2 or 3 o*clock. And in the morning I must get up at 7. I always want to sleep. It is my sweetest dream to have more time for sleeping.

2. We have to do a lot of writing works such as different reports, compositions and so on. All oral subjects are very voluminous. Every paragraf in history contains 10 or even more pages and I have not only to read but to retell it. I don*t speak about literature and great works of our classics such as "War and Peace". So I do only some of those tasks because of lack of time. It *s a pity but I can*t do anything to change it

3.As I*ve said it takes me the most part of my "free time "  to do my homework. prepare for the exams.Besides I have to attend additional lessons and courses. It is the main task for me now to finish school successfully and enter the university I wish to.

4. I haven*t enough time to prepare for my exams better because I have to take part in school  actions. Sometimes everything depends only on me and I can*t  let my class down.I sing. danse. paint and do everything to help our class to win.