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My roomмоя комнатаwe live in a three-room flat. the first room is my parents’ bedroom, the second is a hall for guests, and the third is my bedroom. my favourite room is, of course, my bedroom. i spend most of my time there as it’s not only a bedroom but also a study. my room is very nice and cozy. i can’t say it’s spacious enough but i have everything i need there. there isn’t much furniture, only necessary things. for more convenience it’s built-in. my bed is situated in the left corner of the room, and my desk is in the right. beside my bed there is a stylish lamp and a comfortable armchair with some stuffed animals on it. when it’s rainy weather outside, i like to turn on my lamp, sit in the armchair and read interesting books. as for the desk, it contains numerous drawers where i can keep my pens, pencils, markers, text-books, exercise books, notes, diaries and else. there are also some shelves with books in my room. i have a large collection of russian and english books. there are some posters with my favourite quotations and music bands on the walls. they set a special atmosphere in my room. i like my room a lot. it’s the place where i feel fine. when my friends come over, i invite them into my room. it’s a suitable place both for work and for rest.

If i will have a chance to create my own show, i will call it " give them chance"  in this tv show we will invite, not the most clever people and we will ask them a few questions, some of them will about school program and some about creativity. most of them will fail and we will learn them about 2 months. after that 2 months we will ask them again the questions and those who progressed better will win a prize( money for example) , it will be too good for them, because they will learn a new skills, remember something from the school program.