Проверьте текст по для презентации. . my ideal school. i would like to tell you a few words about my ideal school. first of all if i were a headteacher of my school i would allowed everybody to have an opportunity to use one's phone. i believe that the ideal school - it is technically equipped classrooms , spacious and bright , a sports complex with a gym and swimming pool, workshops , greenhouses and laboratories. homework and again, should be a minimum of compulsory subjects (especially in highschool ) and homework because almost half of the day we spend in school and the other half on the other classes. time for homework is not enough. holidays our holidays. i would like to travel a lot. but when? our holidays must be a bit longer i think. school uniforms schools uniform in ideal school missing but it should not go beyond the bounds of decency. school uniforms schools uniform in ideal school missing but it should not go beyond the bounds of decency.

First of i would allow homework - we spend almost half of the day in school

Все хорошо написано и без ошибок, только тут нужно подправить:   " schoolsuniform in ideal school missing but it should not go beyond the bounds ofdecency.                                                                                                   school uniforms                                                                                                                  schools uniform in ideal schoolmissing but it should not go beyond the bounds of decency." нужно убрать подчеркнутое слово, оно тут ни к чему. я бы сама хотела учиться  в такой школе. 

1.After my brother his homework he out for a walk.

 a) had done, went        

2. We the table before our friends .

a)had laid, came            

3.Fred late to the party because he his way.

b)came, had lost

4.We our lessons by 5 o’clock.

  a)had done            

5.Mother and father came home at 8 o’clock in the evening yesterday. We the flat by that time.

  b) had cleaned

6.I many people when I the door.

 a)saw, had opened        

7.Last year they to Brazil. They to this country before.

 b) went, had never been

Sharks are than lions. (dangerous)

 c) more dangerous

William Shakespeare is than Christopher Marlowe. (famous)

a) more famous

Tom is than David. (selfish)

b) more selfish

He is than he used to be last year. (fat)

c) fatter

Andrew seems to be than he was two months ago. (slim)

a) slimmer

Our town is than Manchester. (attractive)

a) more attractive

The living conditions are than they used to be. (bad)

a) worse

At home, Mother is always than Father. (busy)

d) busier

Exercise 16 is than exercise 15. (easy)

b) easier

"Prevention is than cure". (good)

a) better