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Ilike my bedroom best because it's a very bright and cozy room.it gets a lot of sunshine. there isn't much furniture in it. my room is very light and large. there is a sofa on the right. next to the sofa there is a yellow nightstand. you can see a vase with flowers on my dresser. on the left side of the dresser there is a window. and next to the window there is my desk where i do my homework. of course,  i have a computer desk with my new net-book which connected to internet. along the long wall of my room there is a book-case with many shelves for books and cd-disks. there are some posters with my favorite pop-singers on the walls. and in the middle of the room there is a colorful carpet. i love my room!

one day in 1777 i was relaxing in front of the fire with my laundry drying nearby, after a wrhil i noticed that of of my shirts had started  to  float upward. i  was  curious abot what  was happening so i    thew some  small  pieces of paper  into  the    fireplace  to see  it  the same thing happened to them. when i  saw  them coming out of  the chimney i  came the conclusion that smoke had the    power to lift things up and carry  them through the air.i loved science and wanted to become an  inventor  so i started thying to  think of a craft that would be able to  capture smoke and  lift people  off  the ground.alond  with my brother  jacques i   began perfoming experiments on something that later became the first hot-air balloon.my brothers quickly realised that it was heat and not smoke that had the power to lift things.on 19th september 1783 we presented their first  hot-air ballon which was made from paper and  clot .we burned  some staw underneath it and the heat helped the  ballon  to float.as this was its  first   our trip were  too nervous to go up in the ballon   ourselves.so instead   we put a sheep a duck and a chicken in  the basket that hung below the  balloon for the two-mile journey.the new  invention was a great success and the animals landed safe and    sound.a  huge crowd including some  members of the french royal family  gathered  to watch the  ballon  floathing high in the sky.shottly afterwards we asked the king for  permission  to send men up the ballon.the king agreed and the  first flight consisting of human passengers took place in paris   on      21st november 1783      with great success .the balloon  reached heights of around  150 metres as  it floated aver the paris rooftops starting a long a long tradition of hot-air  ballooning.

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