Проверьте грамотность нескольких предложений my mother studied vichuga school №13 (моя мама училась в вичуге в школе№13) discipline was very strict in school (дисциплина была строгая в школе) after-school were very active. they went to different cities, visiting circuses and theaters ( действия после школы были активными. они ездили в разные города, посещали цирки и театры) they wore mandatory pioneer ties (они носили обязательные пионерские галстуки)

My mother studied in  vichuga at school №13.  discipline was very strict at her school. after-school activities were very popular. they went to different cities, visiting (посещая)  circuses and theatres. или  they went to different cities, visiting (посещали)   circuses and theatres. they were required to wear their  pioneer ties.

My mother studied in  vichuga in  school №13.  discipline was very strict in school. after-school activities were very popular. they went to different cities, visited circuses and theatres. they were required to wear pioneer ties.

Junk food has for a long time been eaten by people.  it is considered easy to get and cheap to buy.  lots of commerciasl every day are broadcast  on the radio and tv.  i strongly believe that advertizing junk  and unhealthy food should be prohibited.  doctors say that junk food leads to obesity and serious diseases.  children like it because it looks nice and smells nice.  but they are not aware of the danger.  some people may think that such a ban on junk food advertisement is a  violation of rights.  it also poses danger to freedom of speech and mass media, they may think.  but i consider that our nation's health is more important.  so we must do all we can to teach people to choose healthy food for themselves and their children. results of scientific research in this field should be made public.  so the people will  finally make the right choice!

Ilike painting. я люблю рисовать. it is my hobby. это мое хобби. i like painting nature, animals and people. я люблю рисовать природу, животных и людей. when i am painting i forget about anything. когда я рисую, я забываю обо всем. in my paintings i want to show the beauty of our world. в своих картинах я хочу показать красоту нашего мира. people are so busy now and they don't notice nice things arround them. люди настолько заняты сейчас, что не замечают прекрасных вещей вокруг себя. but i always see these nice things such as a beautiful flower, yellow leaves, a smile of a baby, a little cat and so on and i try to paint them. но я всегда вижу эти прекрасные вещи такие как красивый цветок, желтые листья, улыбка ребенка, маленький котенок и т.д. и я стараюсь их нарисовать.