Проверьте ошибки . i remember my first teacher very well. her name was elena a.she and we met on the first day of school on a warm autumn day. she has an incredibly warm personality. she was middle-aged of medium. she is well build, wrinkled pale-skinned with rosy cheeks.she usually wears brown curly hair in heatly bun which highlights her round face.her smile whole face lights up. she wears light makeup and casual clothes. she was a kind woman and paid much attention to us all. she taught us to read and write, told us many interesting things about everything and she instructed us how to work. she is very good professional. she loves children, and it is very important in a teacher's work. will always remember e.a. i have only warm memories of those years

Iremember my first teacher very well. her name was elena a.  she and we  (мы имеется в виду ученики? предлагаю убрать she and оставить просто we   met on the first  day of school year  on a warm autumn day. she was an incredibly warm personality. she  was middle-aged of medium ( что значит средних лет середины? можно убрать of medium). she was  well -build, and had  wrinkled pale-skin with rosy cheeks.she  usually wore  brown curly hair in heatly bun ( что значит здоровая булочка? she usually made a bagel with her brown curly hair, that accented her round face)  which highlights her round face.her smile whole face lights up. she wore  light makeup and casual clothes.  (нужно определиться, в каком времени вы пишите, где-то настоящее, где-то прошлое, я все заменила на прошедшее время) she was a kind  woman and paid much attention to all of  us. she taught us how  to read and write.  she  told  us many interesting things about everything and she instructed us how to work ( работать над чем? она не могла вас учить работать в принципе). she was a  very good professional. she love d children, that  is very important in  teacher's job. i  will always remember e.a. i have only warm memories of those years.

1. Paul was driving a car when he heard this news.

2. Tom always comes late for his classes.

3. I locked the door and went to the shop.

4. Pam is jogging in the nearest park at the moment.

5. Helen will call her granny tomorrow morning.

6. They have already bought tickets for the performance.

7. My brother had cleaned the room before I came home.

8. Where have you been recently?

9. Who is playing the computer games now?

10. Where were you going when I saw you yesterday?

11. When will Tim write his report for the future conference?

12. Why did Andrew miss his lectures yesterday?

13. When do you usually have your lunch?

14. What was Ben writing on the blackboard when Nick saw him?

15. I don't like to go to the museums at all.

16. He won't help you because he will be very busy tomorrow.

17. Sam didn't answer my questions yesterday.

18. John hasn't written this difficult grammar test yet.

19. Mona wasn't translating the text when I came home.

20. Mary isn't playing with her dolls at the moment.

21. The boys weren't playing football at 3 o’clock yesterday.

22. I always watch films on TV.

23. Bill often draws wild animals in his copy-books.

24. Nick will bring his parrot to school tomorrow.

25. Jessica has already spent all her money on souvenirs.

26. We went to the amusement park yesterday.

27. I am not cooking dinner at the moment.

28. The boys were talking when I saw them yesterday.

29. My mum had laid the table before we came home.

30. The girls sang a wonderful song at the concert yesterday.

31. David has already read a lot of adventure stories.

32. Mike always listens to rock music.

1. You can go to the party. [can - can't; перед модальными глаголами не ставится вс глагол]

2. He must take his dog for a walk. [В конце модальных глаголов s не ставится, даже с местоимением 3-го лица]

3. I can help you. [После модальных глаголов глагол ставится без частицы to]

4. He mustn't be late. [must - mustn't]

5. Can his brother speak French? [В вопросительном предложении с модальным глаголом ставится основной глагол без s в конце]

6. Paul must go there. [После модальных глаголов глагол ставится без частицы to]

7. You mustn't smoke here. [must - mustn't; перед модальными глаголами не ставится вс глагол]