(a) add s / es / ies to the following verbs: 1. do 8. worry 2. study 9. play 3. teach 10. grow 4. say 11. 5. cry 12. miss 6. dance 13. hurry 7. fix 14. stop

1. does 2. studies 3. teaches 4. says 5. cries 6. dances 7. fixes 8. worries 9. plays 10. grows 11. watches 12. misses 13. hurries 14. stops

Does worries studies plays teaches (grow незн) says watches cries misses dances hurries fixes (stops - тут тож не  уверен) 

в первом предложении артикль the неуместен. правилен "a". во втором предложении более корректным было бы поставить двоеточие вместо тире, после которого также стоит неопределенный артикль "a". что такое hitretsy мне не понятно, и вообще предложение третье предложение неправильно составлено. 

this monkey to me presented on the kindergarten termination - i was six years old

правильно: this monkey was presented to me on the  kindergarten termination when i was  six years old.

  in my hands the toy revived

более верным было бы не revived, a turned to life.

could laugh or cry, use cunning or be angry.

it's could laugh and cry, be sly or angry

she was with me everywhere.

игрушка — неодушевленная вещь, поэтому нельзя применять к ней местоимение she. верным будет it.

the most important that the favourite toy bears with itself is associations.

после important нужно вставить is.

memoirs

memories. ваше слово будет мемуарами, а не воспоминаниями.

затем firstly

die away — такого глагола не существует, и мне даже непонятно, что вы хотели этим сказать.

самые очевидные ошибки. не ручаюсь, что все будет правильно после

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