Как правильно написать по в моем школе есть много вне школьные занятий

There are many  extracurricular activities in my school 

my school day usually starts at 8: 30 am and finishes at 3: 30 pm my fav subject is biology. in my opinion this subject is one of the most interesting. i like learn about nature. i think there are patterns everywhere in nature, i love learn about human and evolution. and this subject will be very useful in my future life in my school i like a library. it’s a wonderful place to think and study. and besides, there you can read so many books, and also finish your homework. i love reading books that inspire me to become more than who i am

26.following a recent renovation, the new hancock observatory invites you to enjoy chicago’s best views from the city’s highest open-air skywalk. it has quickly gained population  with both chicagoans and visitors of the city.27.skywalk is chicago’s highest open-airviewing area. it is 1,000 feet in the air! everyone here can feel the strong wind and hear the dynamic buzz of the city below. the friendly staff will certainly tell the real story behind chicago’s “w indy city” nickname28.for those who feel comfortable about such a great height there are more relaxing indoor audio sky tours.29.these 30-minutepersonal audio tours give a unique “overview” of chicago’s wonderful sights and remarkable history! sky tours are available in english, spanish and german.30.history wall is another popular attraction. more than 100 photos on a great 80-footdisplay show chicago’s rise from a small settlem ent to a great city.31.as a tour guide i have been to the skywalk discount или countless  times and still i can’t help adm iring it.