Небольшая рецензия (типа критик) на макдоналдс

First Russian McDonald's was opened in 1990. It's so old, but it still popular here. I like the food from this restaurant.
So, there are a lot of advantages. First of all, it's really taste. You don't resist remarkable taste of a hamburger.
Second, it's so cheap that everyone can afford it.
I think all this restaurant have their own wi-fi network. And I love all this charity events to support of children's homes.

But, there are a few minuses which play a big role in our life.
For example, scientists proved a long time ago that fast food is not healthy for you. Nobody knows what exactly products use this restaurant. We think it's all natural, but it's not true.

Next, the taste between original, for example, hamburger, and taste of Russian burger is so different. So we don;t know how it's actually tastes.

In the end, I want to say one thing. Of course fast food is taste and cheap, but befor you buy another one burger, think about your health and purse

3 ошибки.
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aunt polly doesn't always sendS presents
kate doesnt often writeS letter to her friend
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no, jack doesn't always bring flowers to his sister
aunt polly doesn't always send presents
kate doesnt often write letters to her friend

My biography. My name is Inga, I am 17 years old. I was born on June 8, 1997 in the Kitsch - the Town of the Vologda region. My mother is called Galina she is an accountant. My father is called Vasily he is the technician of forest and forest-park economy. I have a sister Ania and the brother Sasha. In the first class I went to school in the village Garages and with first on the fifth class I studied in a class one. Then our school was closed and we began to be carried in other school, there I found many friends and with all made friends, there I studied with 6 on 8 class. In the 9th class I went to other school as we moved with a family to other place. Now I am the student of the second year in the Vologda technical school of railway transport.