Проверьте, i want to tell you about very interesting book "the fault in our stars". i read this book about 1 week ago. the fault in our stars is the sixth novel by author john green, published in january 2012. this book was written by john green. hazel meets a 17-year-old boy named augustus waters. he lose his leg. hazel is a young girl who has hard destiny she sick with a cancer. in order do not deep in the depression hazel enters a support group, where people who have cancer, trying to help each other. in this group she met augustus waters. she feel in live in him. i think, that this plot is very interesting.the most interesting episode of the book is the moment when they went to amsterdam. augustus confesses his love for hazel. hazel and augustus finally meet van houten. they was horrified by van houten's behavior. he was drunk.he started proceeds to insult hazel's cancer.

...about a very interesting book...
...by John Green... (в 3ей строке)
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...he lost his leg...
...she felt in love in him...

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I want to tell you about very interesting book "The Fault in Our Stars". I read this book about a week ago. The Fault in Our Stars is the sixth novel by John Green, published in January 2012. This book was written by John Green. 
Hazel meets a 17-year-old boy named Augustus Waters. He lose his leg. 
Hazel is a young girl who has hard destiny because she sick with a cancer. In order do not deep in the depression Hazel enters a support group, where people who have cancer, trying to help each other. In this group she met Augustus Waters. She feel in live in him. 
I think,that this plot is very interesting. The most interesting episode of the book is the moment when they went to Amsterdam. Augustus confesses his love for Hazel. Hazel and Augustus finally meet Van Houten. They was horrified by Van Houten's behavior. He was drunk. He started proceeds to insult Hazel's cancer.
P. S. В некоторых местах можно рассказать историю поподробнее. 
P. S. S. Хорошая книга!

я выбрала карту "Music" самое первое.

1My favorite singer is Park Jimin (напиши про своего певца любимого, я написала про Park Jimin)

2About his biography, I can say that he was born in South Korea in 1995. He is a South Korean singer, dancer, songwriter and he is the vocalist and member for BTS's boy band also he's a good person. (написать про биографию певца, я написала про биографию Park Jimin)

3 I listen to songs almost every day because songs inspire me. ( про частоту слушания песен, я написала что слушаю почти каждый день потому что песни вдохновляют меня, причину можно написать по желанию если можно добавлять дополнения)

4 I can't play any musical instrument yet, but maybe I will start learning play soon. (написать умеешь ли играть на музыкальных инструментах, я написала что пока что не умею, но возможно скоро начну учиться играть.)

Dear Kazakhs!
I warmly congratulate you with one of the most important holidays of our country - the Independence Day of the Republic of Kazakhstan!
Сегодня мы исполняем свою историческую миссию - строим независимый, процветающий, политически стабильный Казахстан.  
For a little over two decades, we have established a strong state, new economy and a new unified society.
We have crisp guidelines for the further path.
In his Message to the Nation "Strategy" Kazakhstan-2050 "The Head of state - Leader of the Nation Nursultan Nazarbayev, has defined a new political course of the country, which will ensure the entry of the Republic to the thirty most developed countries in the world.
Our main value - people, who respect for the history and traditions, celebrate their homeland by their work. 
The people of Kazakhstan together with its President continue building a sovereign, prosperous state.
I wish every home and every family health and welfare, prosperity, tranquility and peace!