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How I spent last summer

I think summer is the best season of all because it is warm, the nature is beautiful and we have great opportunities for rest. Summer is a time of holidays. We can go anywhere, spend our time near a river or a lake on fresh, green grass, swim in warm water, or climb mountains, play different games, ride a bicycle and so on.

I spend my summer holidays at my granny’s. There are many things there to do. What I did most of the time - I swam in the sea and sunbathed. Sometimes I made a fire with my friends at the seaside and cooked potatoes there. It was wonderful. We told anecdotes to each other, and did everything we wanted. I also got used to walk alone in the forest.

Как я провел лето

Я думаю, лето - самое лучшее время года, потому что тепло, вокруг очень красиво и у нас есть чудесная возможность отдохнуть. Лето - время отпусков и каникул. Мы можем поехать куда угодно, проводить время у реки или озера на свежей зеленой траве, плавать в теплой воде, или подняться в горы, или играть в различные игры, кататься на велосипеде и т. д.

Я провожу летние каникулы у моей бабули. Там есть чем заняться. Большую часть времени я плавал в море и загорал. Иногда я разжигал с друзьями костер на берегу и мы пекли в нем картошку. Это было замечательно. Мы рассказывали друг другу анекдоты, и делали все, что хотели. А еще я часто ходил один в лес.

I'm Jack Wilson, a student from London. My friend Val Now uneversity student. He's older than me with my problems and teaches me many things.
Written off translation: Val has a lot of hobbies. He lokes collecting different things. When he was in school, he collected stamps, coing and icons. He kept them in a large alboms and very proud of him. ONCE he brought them to school and we could see them all. His collection became famous in our school.
But Val stopped collecting stamps and icons AST Year. He took up photography. He said that the pictures are easy to take and it's fun to take them. Some of his pictures are very good, some are bad. Val learns, and I only know that it will be one of the best photographers in his uneversity.