Say if the following sentences are right or wrong. correct them if necessary.1. have you ever been to thailand? .2. i've had sausages for lunch at half past one3. she's enjoyed herself at the party last night4. i've read that book but i didn't like it much. 5. tom has left school one year ago. 6my cousins have lived in dublin since they've been children.7we have worked here for a year and a half.8my parents lived in britain for a couple of years.9james has made a cake yesterday.10 i've washed the car. it looks great now.​

Right: 1, 4, 7, 8, 10

Wrong: 2, 3, 5, 6, 9

Неверные предложения отмечены (-), верные - (+)

1. (+)

2. (-) I  had  sausages for lunch at half past one.  (Past  Simple)

3. (-) She  enjoyed  herself at the party last night.  (Past  Simple)

4. (+)

5. (-) Tom  left  school one year ago.  (Past  Simple)

6. (-) My cousins have  lived in Dublin since they were children.  (Present   Perfect)

7. (+)

8. (+)

9. (-) James  made  a cake yesterday.  (Past Simple)

10. (+)

Past  Simple  (простое время)  используется, если  событие произошло в определенное время в и не продолжается в настоящем. В Past Simple  могут использоваться слова:  

ago (one year ago – год назад),

yesterday (вчера),

last (last year – в году) и др.

Present  Perfect  (настоящее  совершенное  время)   обозначает:  

- действие, уже совершившееся до момента речи, но имеющего непосредственную связь с настоящим моментом,

- действие, начавшееся в но которое еще не закончилось (т.е. которое все еще продолжается). Часто употребляется с обстоятельствами времени с предлогом for — в течение (for years — в течение многих лет), с предлогом since — с (since 2017), а также придаточным предложением с союзом since — с тех пор.

- действие хотя и произошло в но может быть повторено.

и т.д. смотри правила.  

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1) Fern said to her mother - не "said to", a "asked".
2) ax - такого слова нет, зато есть слово "axe".
3) to kill is a runt pig - "is" - лишнее.
4) A girl of eight years - правильнее будет написать "A eight years old girl".
5) seared - может быть "scared"?
6) ran for his father - "girl" - женский род, а потому не "his", a "her".
7) Fern said to not kill it, please - "please" - лишнее.
8) would have - правильно использовать "had" (без "would").
9) said she went back to the house - 1) "said that she went". 2) "back into the house".
10) and he would bring the runt - "and that he would...".
11) Arable pig brought into the house, he was a newborn and white - "When Arable brought the pig into the house, it was newborn and white".
12) The father said he than belongs to Fern - "The father said that it belongs to Fern".
13) Girl - "The girl".
14) She looked at him and said that he was perfect - "She looked at it and said that it was perfect".