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Dear Ben,

Thank you for your letter. It was nice to hear from you!

In your letter you ask me about my school trip to Moscow. Well, I'm writing this letter from Moscow. We are staying at a hotel. We came here yesterday and have already seen a lot of interesting places. It's evening now and my classmates are watching TV. We wanted to go for a walk but it is raining now. Tomorrow is the last day of our trip and we are going to the Tretyakov Gallery.

I need to finish now, but soon I'll write more.

Best wishes,

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Я думаю, что школьники не должны работать. Для этого я могу привести несколько причин. Во-первых, работа будет мешать учёбе и школьник может не угнаться на программой и отстать от класса. Во-вторых существует мало работ, куда возьмут детей. На работу берут людей, достигших 18 лет. Поэтому самое лучшее для школьника - это заняться учёбой. Толка будет для этого больше. Если школьник будет хорошо учиться, то родителям в будущем не придётся платить за его обучение в вузе. Тем самым он как-бы ''зарабатывает своим родителям!

I think that students should not work. To do this, I can give you several reasons. First, the work will not interfere with school and student can not keep up on the program and keep up with the class. Secondly, there is little work to take children. Work take people under age 18. So the best thing for a student - to do this study. Sense for this to be more. If the student is a good student, the parents in the future will not have to pay for his college education. He thus, as it were'' earns'' helping their parents!

The exact time and place of Marco Polo's birth are unknown, and current theories are mostly conjectural. One possible place of birth is Venice's former contrada, which is often presented by historians as the birthplace, and it is generally accepted that Marco Polo was born in the Venetian Republic with most biographers pointing towards Venice itself as Marco Polo's home town. Some biographers suggest that Polo was born in Curzola today known as Korčula in present-day Croatia however there is no proof to this claim. The most quoted specific date of Polo's birth is somewhere "around 1254".His father Niccolò was a merchant who traded with the Middle East, becoming wealthy and achieving great prestige. Niccolò and his brother Maffeo set off on a trading voyage, before Marco was born.