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My best friend is Diana.She is tall and she has a thin build. She also has blue eyes and a pretty face. She  likes to watch movies,watch anime and also she loves to eat.She often draws and she is good at it.She loves to collect puzzles.We often talk on the phone.Unfortunately, she doesn't have many friends in real life,but  she has friends on the Internet.Diana is very lazy, and still very untidy.Therefore, she loves to sleep a lot.Anyway, I love her the way she is.

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My best friend is Diana.She is tall and she has a thin build. She also has blue eyes and a pretty face. She  likes to watch movies,watch anime and also she loves to eat.She often draws and she is good at it.She loves to collect puzzles.We often talk on the phone.Unfortunately, she doesn't have many friends in real life,but  she has friends on the Internet.Diana is very lazy, and still very untidy.Therefore, she loves to sleep a lot.Anyway, I love her the way she is.

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