Сочинение на тему my favourite please in moscow. 10-11 предл.

Moscow is the capital of RUssia. It is one of the biggest cities in the world.
Today, Moscow one of the most beautiful and modern city. The population of the city is about 12 million people.
Moscow was founded in 1147 by Yuri Dolgoruky.
Moscow is a culter center. There aer 60 professional theatress, 74 museums,
By the way, The Bolshoi is famous all over the world.
In Moscow you can go to the Tretyakov Art Gallery. Or to the Pushkin Fine Arts Museum and see a lot of intresting things there.
Of cause, in Moscow you must see the Kremlin and Red Squre. There are a lot og churches, parks and monuments.
A lot of foregners from all over the world come to see beutiful city. 
I live in Russia and I am proud of my capital.
Простите, больше ничего в голову не лезет. тут, скорее всего, есть ошибки.

angry – angrier –the angriest
brave – braver – the bravest
bad – worse - the worst
convenient – more convenient – the most convenient
dry – drier – the driest
dead – не образует степеней сравнения? (deader – the deadest)
final – не образует степеней сравнения?
good – better – the best
heavy – heavier – the heaviest
narrow – narrow/ more narrow – the narrowest / the most narrow (и так и так можно образовывать)
perfect – more perfect – the most perfect
persian – не образует степеней сравнения
right (left) – не образует степеней сравнения
square – more square – the most square
important – more important – the most important
white – whiter – the whitest
yellow – не образует степеней сравнения? (yellower – the yellowest)
unique - не образует степеней сравнения
little – less – the least
ОТНОСИТЕЛЬНЫЕ ПРИЛАГАТЕЛЬНЫЕ НЕ ИМЕЮТ  СТЕПЕНЕЙ СРАВНЕНИЯ  

2 They naively think can only get (good) (УТОЧНИТЕ предложение!)
3 This is (the most unbelievable) news i have ever heard.
4 He ate (fewer) French fries than you did at the picnic.
5 Angela is (less) organized than Mike.
6 My house is (bigger) than yours.
7 This flower is (more beautiful) than that one.
8 This is the (most interesting) book i have ever read.
9 John is (taller than) Glen.

Что касается меня, я увлекаюсь спортом с детства. Честно говоря, я предпочитаю командные игры, так как люблю чувствовать поддержку партнеров в таких играх. Волейбол – моя любимая игра. Нужно быть быстрым и подавать неожиданные мячи своим соперникам по другую сторону сетки. В школе я был капитаном нашей волейбольной команды, и мы участвовали в городских матчах. Мне нравилась атмосфера соревнования и сладкий вкус наших побед. Иногда мы проигрывали, конечно, но старались принимать поражение с достоинством. А сейчас, когда приходит лето, мы часто играем в пляжный волейбол.

As for me, I’ve been fond of sports activities since my childhood. To tell the truth I prefer team games because I like feeling support of my partners in such games. Volleyball is my favorite. You have to be fast and give unexpected balls to your competitors on the other side of the net. At school I was the captain of our volleyball team and we took part in our city matches. I enjoyed the atmosphere of competitions and the sweet taste of our victories. Sometimes we lost, of course, but we tried to accept our defeat with dignity. And now when summer comes we often play beach volleyball.