Сочинение по тексту the great shooting day

Hi, guy!
Today I tell you about my great shooting day. I like to shooting with gun. My dad taught me to shoot and hunt on animals or birds. From hunting I get pleasure. this how to second my breath. I will never stop hunting and shooting...

Girl Alice-the heroine of the fairy tale "Alice in Wonderland". I love her because she is beautiful, cheerful, friendly, brave. On the way to Wonderland she meets many obstacles and cope with them. Alice is my Lubin heroine of this tale.
Перевод:
Девочка Алиса-героиня сказки "Алиса в стране чудес". Я её люблю, за то что она красивая, весёлая, дружелюбная, отважная. На пути в стране чудес она встречает много препятствий и справляется с ними. Алиса-моя любиная героиня этой сказки.
Правда я про Алису составила, когда уже сама перевела и увидела что её нельзя, уже поленилась делать заново. Но если её всё таки точно нельзя, тогда пусть это будет пример.

1. English learning is very important nowadays. 2. First of all, English is international language and most people of the planet speak English. 3. Secondly, many employers require knowledge of English. 4. Then, it is very important to know English if you are planning to go abroad. 5. As far as last researches state, language learning helps to broaden your mind. 6. I personally would like to travel around the world. 7. My dream is to see the most favorite touristic sights like Niagara Waterfalls, the Great Wall, the Eiffel Tower and many others. 8. Traveling around the world couldn’t be imagined without knowing of foreign language and English particularly. 9. Another solid reason for me to learn English is to try foreign dishes and cuisine of different countries. English knowledge is vital nowadays, as if you don’t know English, then you considered as a churl.

Не умею я писать на русском, всегда сразу на английском сочиняю. Интернет перевести на русский. Поздно я увидел русский текст. Видимо, пока сочинял, вы и написали русский.