Поставьте вопросы к тексту every summer we go to the seaside for two weeks. we usually stay at the hotel. and here we are now. my sister is sitting in the "armchair and reading a book, her little son is playing in the sun with his friend. one big boy is swimming to a big black rock. i am not swimming. i am helping my mother with dinner. but i like swimming in warm water very much.

The Bolshoi Theatre is one of the largest in Russia and one of the most significant in the world opera and ballet theaters. The theater is located at the Theater Square in Moscow. It was founded in March 1776 by prince Pyotr Vasilievich Urusov

Red Square is a central city square in Moscow, the capital of Russia. It is always open to visitors and tourists love taking pictures there.The name of the square comes from the color of the bricks around it. Many famous Russian artists pictured the square in their works

Opposite the Kremlin on Red Square is GUM, the country's largest department store. It was completed in the early 1890's and remodelled in 1953. The initials GUM come from three Russian words that mean State Department Store.

The second part returned to their adulthood.  It awoke and a series of child murders caused Mike, the town’s librarian, to call the group back together. They all agreed to return except for Stan who slited his wrists rather than return.

Mike reminded them of the story and they decided to kill it once and for all. It began to manipulate the minds of those around him and it kidnaped some of their significant others. It appeared to them as their original fears and they followed it to its lair. There it almost killed them but they performed the Ritual as in the first part.

They managed to injure it severely and they saved Bill from the Deadlights. They found that it had laid eggs, so they destroyed them and Bill crushed it’s heart between his hands finally killed it. A massive storm swept through Maine, collapsing Derry’s downtown and they concluded that it’s influence had finally broke.

As they went through the next months, their memories began to fade and they gradually forgot about it and each other. It and the town of Derry had finally died, ending the influence of the being once and for all.

Много запятых , они расставленны как в рускком языке

В английском языке с этим проще.

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