Может кто проверить сочинение, : 3 star wars day is unofficial holiday celebrated by fans of the fantastic saga of george lucas "star wars". this event is celebrating four days in the year. for the first time is celebrating in may fourth, then fifth and sixth of may, and the last time 25th of may. these days are the best for the star wars fans. before 4th, 5th and 6th of may people are starting to make costumes of characters from the film. usually the costumes are brown or black mantle and plastic laser sword. fever girls dress white dress and make two "donuts" on the head. people begin watch star wars films and hang posters on the walls. people meet in social networks or in real life, discuss their favorite parts of the movie, playing the roles of characters from movies. fans can gather in one place or in social networks and start watching movies. fans of the saga love to think of the development of the plot in the next movies, so in social networks held competitions for the best plot. during holidays play imperial march, because is one of the main melodies in whole saga. star wars day is great day for the fans, that waiting this celebration so much, so fans are very happy.

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N the painting “Girl with peaches” (the famous portrait of Vera Mamontova by Russian artist Valentin Serov) we can see a girl in a light pink dress, sitting at the table. The girl is about twelve years old.

She is dark-skinned and there is bright blush on her cheeks. She has got thick dark hair, which is a bit tousled. The girl has got a pretty roundish face. Her eyebrows are dark and thick. She has got big brown eyes.

The girl is sitting in a light room. I think it is a dining room. Behind the girl there is a big window in a white wooden frame. Through the window we can see some leaves of the trees in the garden. The leaves are light green and yellow. The walls in the room are white. There is a big white porcelain plate on the wall next to the window with a beautiful blue pattern on it. Behind the girl we can also see a statuette of a soldier.

There are some dark brown wooden chairs in the room and a small table beside the window. The big table, at which the girl is sitting, is covered with a white tablecloth.

The girl is holding a big yellow peach in her hands. On the table in front of the girl there are three more peaches. There are also some dry maple leaves and a small knife.

1.Я смотрю телевизор по вечерам. - Present Simple
2.Где твой брат? - Он в гостиной смотрит телевизор. - Present Continuous
3.Вчера я не смотрела телевизор, т. к. была занята. - Past Simple
4.Я только что посмотрела эту программу. - Present Perfect
5.Я смотрела телевизор, когда вошла мать. - Past Continuous
6.Я уже посмотрела этот фильм, когда при-шел отец. - Past Perfect
7.Я посмотрю фильм к тому времени, когда придет мой друг. - Future Perfect
 8.Завтра по телевизору интересная передача. Я буду обязательно смотреть ее. - Future Simple
9.Завтра в полдень я буду смотреть интересный фильм по телевизору. - Future Continuous
10.Ты смотришь телевизор уже 4 часа подряд. - Present Perfect Continuous
11.Я понял, что смотрел телевизор слишком долго. - Past Perfect Continuous
12.Пока ты придешь, я в течение часа буду смотреть телевизор. - Future Perfect Continuous