Проверьте этот текст.я писала его сама.нужно ли что-то исправить? там про фотграфию заката, но мне главное, чтобы было правильное содержание и не было ошибок если можете, то напишите, что можно еще добавить i want to tell you about the photos. this photo was taken in the courtyard of my house. on date by 28.09.2016. our family was on the street, where i took this photo. the sunset is a stunner. always a pleasure to see him. it is very beautiful. i'm ready to meet the sunset almost every day. the most beautiful sunsets in the summer, but in my case the sunset was photographed in september. the beauty of a sunset is a beautiful color of the sky, which change over time. the sunset is very cool!

Все отлично. Хорошего вечера.

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My favorite drink is orange juice. I drink it every day and I like it. I think many people agree with me. My favorite food is (сосиски , любое что ты любишь из еды). I like this food because I enjoy it, when I eat this food. I don't like pomidors (for example), because they are red, and I don't like this color. I don't like drink milk (for example), because it has a strange smell. In a tipical day on breakfast I eat porridge, because it give me a power and drink tea. On lunch I eat soup, because once a day person have to eat a soup. On supper I eat macaroni and sausages. I like it. And of course drink orange juice.

My Room
I have got a big room. I have got a table. I do my homework sitting at the table. Near the table there is a chair. Opposite the table there is a sofa. I sleep on the sofa. There is a big window in the room. From the window I can see our yard and my friends playing tag. I have got a cupboard. I keep my clothes, books and some toys there. There is a special place for my toys in the room - a big box. It is always warm in my room. I like it very much!

У меня большая комната. У меня есть стол. Здесь я делаю уроки. Рядом со столом стоит стул. Напротив стола стоит диван. На нем я сплю. В комнате есть большое окно. Из окна можно увидеть двор и ребят, играющих в салки. У меня есть шкаф, в котором я храню свою одежду, книги и некоторые игрушки. Для игрушек стоит специальная коробка. В комнате всегда тепло. Я очень люблю свою комнату!