My favourite possession сочинение(только не про ноут)) над, плеес

На английском языке:My favourite possession is my laptop. Today, there are so many opportunities to buy whatever you like. If you don’t like your shoes, you can buy new ones. If you want a new camera but you don’t have enough money, you can ask your parents to help. Another choice is to save some money and then buy it. However, I think that such an abundance of opportunities leads to careless usage of things. People easily break things and throw them away, not even trying to fix them. I always try to handle carefully my possessions, be it a laptop or a cell phone. My laptop is rather old now but it still looks fancy. It is of a silver colour and has a black keyboard. I can’t imagine how people managed to work or study without computers. Only a couple of decades ago people didn’t know what the laptop is. Today, it has become an indispensable object in every house. As for me, it is always at my service when I do my homework, prepare for exams, chat with friends, type documents, edit photos and want to store some information. My parents use a desktop computer, but I prefer my laptop. First of all, it is easy to carry around. When we go on a trip, I always take it with me. Secondly, it gives me a wide range of possibilities. I can use it as a communicator, a CD-player, a TV, a radio, an e-book, photo editor, etc. Thirdly, it takes up less space than desktop computers. So, I don’t even need to buy a special desk for it. Thanks to its portable nature, it can be used anywhere: in the kitchen, in the bedroom or in the car. In conclusion, I’d like to say that modern technologies are moving on. So, soon we might replace laptops with something even more convenient.Перевод:Моя любимая вещь – это мой ноутбук. Сегодня так много возможностей, чтобы купить все, что угодно. Если вам не нравятся ваши туфли, вы можете купить новые. Если вы хотите новую камеру, но у вас недостаточно денег, вы можете попросить о своих родителей. Другая альтернатива – сэкономить деньги, а затем купить ее. Тем не менее, я думаю, что такое обилие возможностей приводит к неаккуратному использованию вещей. Люди легко все ломают и выбрасывают, даже не пытаясь починить. Я всегда стараюсь аккуратно использовать свои принадлежности, будь то ноутбук или мобильный телефон. Мой ноутбук уже довольно старый, но он по-прежнему отлично выглядит. Он серебристого цвета и имеет черную клавиатуру. Никак не могу себе представить, как людям удавалось работать и учиться без компьютера. Всего лишь несколько десятилетий тому назад люди даже не знали, что такое ноутбук. Сегодня он стал незаменимым объектом в каждом доме. Что касается меня, то с его я делаю свою домашнюю работу, готовлюсь к экзаменам, общаюсь с друзьями, набираю документы, редактирую фотографии и сохраняю необходимую информацию. Мои родители используют настольный компьютер, но я предпочитаю свой ноутбук. Во-первых, его легко носить с собой. Когда мы отправляемся в путешествие, я всегда беру его с собой. Во-вторых, он дает мне широкий спектр возможностей. Я могу использовать его в качестве коммуникатора, CD-плеера, телевизора, радио, электронной книжки, редактора фотографий и т.д. В-третьих, он занимает меньше места, чем настольные компьютеры. Таким образом, мне даже не нужно покупать специальный стол под него. Благодаря своей портативности, он может быть использован в любом месте: на кухне, в спальне или в машине. В заключение я хотела бы сказать, что современные технологии не стоят на месте. Поэтому, в ближайшее время, возможно, мы заменим ноутбуки чем-то еще более удобным

My favourite possession isn't of  materialistic plan, It's not a computer,a mobile phone or something similar. I'd like to say about my family. We are very friendly, we love each other in our family, we are ready to help each other in a difficult situation. Understanding and parents'support make me strong and more responsible. I'm proud of my grandparents who survived the Great Patriotic War in the sever battles. They both are very heroic persons and very modest too.I'd like to follow my grandparents and my parents' steps because they did all their possible for our people and our glorious motherland. They worked a lot, they didn't become rich, but they always were honest and kind, helpful and responcible for their actions. I'm proud of my family and think that it's the most costly (дорогостоящий) possession.

Summer holidays give the longest rest from studying of the year that’s why I like them so much. In June I stayed at home and my parents were at work. But I was glad because at last I had time for myself. I read books, listened to music, watched films and visited my friend. I spend most days outdoors and got a nice sun tan. Then I spent two weeks in the summer camp on the seaside. It was a real fun. I met a lot of new friends. Every day we enjoyed something special - games, carnivals, competitions, performances. We went to the seaside twice a day. There we swam, bathed in the sun, played volleyball on the beach, made sculptures of sand. We had discos every night, but not too long. I guess, those were the most exciting weeks of the summer. It gave me bright impressions, lots of funny photos and some new friends. Then my parents were on vacation and so they took me to my parent’s place in the village. It’s a very picturesque place with a forest and a river nearby. I was happy to see my grandmother and grandfather. I spent hot days on the riverbank. Once we went hiking with my parents, made fire, gathered some berries. The summer forest is very beautiful. In the evening I usually helped in the garden. Last month of the summer I was at home again, having rest from such an intensive rest! I did usual things and prepared for school. I like my summer holidays! Read more: http://ycilka.net/tvir.php?id=200#ixzz48TGnfGRB

Так более правильно, перевод который написали выше, не правильный. Скорее взят с какого-то очень плохого переводчика.P.S переводила сама. Учусь на переводчика.
How I spent my holidays.
My holidays was very good, but only one week - it was very little for me. I went to summer cottage to my friends, there was wet, cold, nesty and dark. They invited me to celebrate Halloween and I agreed. They maked up and dressed up me and we went to homes, that request sweets. Then we had a party. It was very cool, the house was decorated, there were a lot of people and all of them were very scary. I stayed here on night. After the night some people carried me to my home. We very long time remember this party. Then we went for a walk, playing cards, went quad biking. It was very vondereful. On next day I was at home and help my grandmother to finish repair. Then I went to home and there went for a walk with my friend. After that I went to get a passport. On next day Katya went to us and we went to cafe. There we ate, she told me how she spent her holiday, she said that it was very good. 
I would like to go to museum or cinema, but I haven`t any time . It`s bad, but my holliday was very good.