Составить рассказ в present simple/present continuous (10 предложений)

1Я занятI am busy2Она работает слишком многоShe works too much3Мы часто ходим за покупкамиWe often go shopping4Им нравится рок-музыкаThey like rock music5Он никогда не пьет алкогольHe never drinks alcohol6Я встаю в семь часов утра каждый деньI get up at 7 o’clock in the morning every day7Ты выглядишь уставшимYou look tired8Это очень интересноIt is very interesting9Они часто намThey often help us10Мне нужно взять отпускI need to take a holiday

We have become smarter and made a lot of friends and girlfriends .we were very lucky with a second in the life of a teacher. she likes us, cares and pays us a lot of free time. with the class we went to different trips, on picnics, where they ate hotdogs and played different games.  we are learning the lessons of the world, painted on every picture, thought of in math class, had fun in pe and many other things we did in elementary school. in addition, we were also creative guys. each holiday we prepare teacher performances, concerts and parties. this is a very interesting, fun,  we have a very friendly class. we never swear. we give each other gifts, have a tea party with treats and fun contests.  all this – the merit of our dear teacher.  i'll never forget primary school!   i hope that over time our friendship with classmates will become stronger.

1)This history tells us about girls who have gone to travel to London by train. 2)After a while Sara and Rachelle have arrived in Notting Hill. 3)The Girls took a look around and have understood that they have reached Notting Hill 4)Thousands of people lined the streets to look at parade. 5)The Procession began and girlfriends have seen people in colourful dresses which danced under music 6) But the storm has suddenly begun 7) Sora got separated from Rachel 8) But suddenly Sarah saw Rachel's umbrella 9) the Girls were reunited and had coffee together

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