Правильно ли будет such a large sum of money? so much complicated work?

Написано правильно , а задание какое ?

My parents like their work very much. Мои родители очень любят свою работу. My elder sister goes to the University. Моя старшая сестра идет в университет. She wants to be a teacher of geography. Она хочет быть учителем географии. My little brother goes to the kindergarten. Мой маленький брат ходит в детский сад. Simon likes to play with our cat. Саймон любит играть с нашим котом. My grandparents spend a lot of their time in the garden. Мои бабушка и дедушка проводят много времени в саду. Granny grows his vegetables and fruit. Бабуля выращивает овощи и фрукты. My friend goes in for sports. Мой друг занимается спортом. She swims and plays tennis. Она плавает и играет в теннис. He does well at school. Он хорошо учится в школе. My father and I like to discuss books in the evening. Мы с папой любим обсуждать книги по вечерам. We always help each other. Мы всегда друг другу.

Yesterday I was in cinema with my best friend. We had chosen to go to a film "Charlie and the Chocolate Factory". Now I am very happy because I have seen this wonderful movie. 

This is a story about a small boy Charlie from a poor family, who had found one of five golden tickets to the most magnificent Chocolate factory in the world. There were also 4 children, who all had really bad behaviour, so the had problems in factory. 

In the end of story the owner of the factory, Willy Wonka, gives his factory to Charlie, and Charlie with his family moved there.

I suppose It's very great and interesting film. I advice everyone, especially children, to see it.