Исправте ошибки в сочинении и еще ошибки в построении предложения hi paul, thank you for your last letter. hope you are ok. i went with my family to the planetarium in moscow. the tour began with the urania museum, named after the muse of astronomy. we were greeted by a wax statue of an astrologer, surrounded by old books, engravings, instruments, and everything needed for science. in the windows of the same hall are all kinds of instruments, telescopes, instruments and hourglass. after that , we went to the great star hall, where with the help of the most modern equipment, an illusion of flight through space and time is created. in the planetarium we were told about the planets, constellations, the history of our planet and the future of our galaxy. we seemed to fly on a superfast ship, overcoming space and time, observing through the porthole the most important events on our planet that have made the fate of the earth. i hope i will go back soon as i leaned so much and had a lot of fun. all in all, a had really fantastic day. i really enjoyed hiking with my family is a planetarium. i'm planning to go back again with my friends next month. that's all for now, anna

Да вроде нормально всё.Или это я в английском плоха)

In most regions of our Republic, the environmental situation is not only unfavorable, but it's also catastrophic.The main sources of pollution and degradation of natural systems are industry, agriculture, road transport and other anthropogenic factors. Of all the constituent components of the biosphere and the environment, the atmosphere is the most sensitive, not only to polluting gases, but also liquid and solid substances. Man pollutes the atmosphere for thousands of years, but the consequences of the use of fire, which he used all this period were insignificant. In Kazakhstan and Central Asia there are about 50 ‑ 60 million hectares of land suitable for irrigation. At the same time, water resources are enough only for irrigation of 8 ‑ 10 million hectares. In such conditions, it is necessary to choose the right ways to develop irrigated agriculture, to prevent irreversible destruction of the ecosystem. One more important problem is directly related to the fate of the Aral sea. 

В большинстве регионов нашей республики экологическая ситуация не только неблагоприятная, но и катастрофическая.Основные источники загрязнения и деградации природных систем, являются промышленность, сельское хозяйство, автомобильный транспорт и другие антропогенные факторы. Из всех составляющих компонентов биосферы и окружающей среды атмосфера наиболее чувствительна не только к загрязняющим газам, но и к жидким и твердым веществам. Человек загрязняет атмосферу тысячелетиями, однако последствия употребления огня, которым он пользовался весь этот период были незначительными. В Казахстане и Средней Азии насчитывается примерно 50 ‑ 60 млн. га земель, пригодных для орошения. В то же время водных ресурсов хватает только на орошение 8 ‑ 10 млн. га. В таких условиях необходимо правильно выбрать пути развития орошаемого земледелия, чтобы предотвратить необратимое разрушение экосистемы. Еще одна важная проблема напрямую связана с судьбой Аральского моря.

1) I want to tell you about
2) to be a student...
3) on weekdays
4) on working days
5) to wake up
6) to get up at 7a.m.
7) to take a shower
8) to brush teeth
9) to dress (to get dressed)
10) it takes me an hour to get to...
11) to go by trolleybus (tram/bus)
12) to be late for class(es)
13) to finish late at night
14) to miss classes
15) to pass exams successfully
16) from time to time
17) to get ready for classes
18) as a rule  
19) to be tired of ( to get tired)
20) free time

1. He’s got much information about our travel.
2. He’s going to buy some new trousers.
3. They are not going to buy new furniture.
4. His hair is fair.
5. I’m going to buy new sunglasses.
6. They gave us some advice.