Отредактируйте текст и исправьте грамматические ошибки, ! заранее )) my name is ann. i'm in the 10th form, at the larzha school. i like my school, however, if i were a director, i would try to make school everyday more fun and better. first of all, what i would do is improve the food in the dining room. i would add more fruit to the menu of the dining room and exclude the compote from dried fruits. secondly, i would increase the time of the changes, since the children must have time to do all their business. i would increase the fall and winter holidays so that the children can rest with their family or spend time with benefit. i would introduce excursions and trips to the school schedule so that the children would get acquainted with new places. i would make a separate room in the school of my dreams, with sofas, pillows, and blankets, so that the students could have a good rest or get warm. the school of my dreams is a school in which every student will come with joy and try not to miss classes.

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We all need exercise. This is true for young people (in their teens) as well as for adults. Even if you don't plan make sports your main occupation. This is my opinion and I feel like it is true.

As long as I can remember myself I was always keen on tennis. I love this sport with its old noble traditions, though myself never dreamed of becoming anything more than an amateur.

I watch closely all tennis competitions and championships. There are a lot of them, but my favourite championship is Wimbledon because old tennis traditions remains there as they are. Some of the most well-known Wimbledon champions are: John McEnroe, Boris Becker, Steffi Graf, Monica Seles. My dream is to get a chance to watch at least one of them playing.

And meantime I play tennis with my friends. It is also a great opportunity to socialize with people who have similar interest (as any sport I suppose).

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Нам всем нужны тренировки. Это так же верно для молодежи, как и для старших. Даже если вы не собираетесь выбирать спорт в качестве профессии. Это мое мнение, и оно мне кажется правильным.

Сколько я себя помню, мне всегда ужасно нравился теннис. Я люблю этот спорт с его старыми благородными традициями, хотя я никогда не мечтала быть чем-то больше любителя.

Я внимательно слежу за соревнованиями и чемпионатами по теннису. Их существует очень много, но мой любимый — Уимблдон, потому что в нем старые теннисные традиции сохраняются такими, какими были. Некоторые из самых известных победителей Уимблдона: Джон Маккенрой, Борис Беккер, Штеффи Граф, Моника Селеш. Моя мечта — увидеть хотя бы одного из них.

                                       My Dream classroom.
I would like the classroom of my dream to be large and light.The classroom of my dream would have computers on each desk.The classroom would have  good comfortable new furniture. In winter the classroom would be warm.There would be plenty of plants in the classroom.There would be a smart board on the wall. The children and teachers would be kind and polite. They would be intelligent and would respect each other. This is the class of my dreams.
Класс моей мечты.Я хотел бы, чтобы класс моей мечты был большим и светлым. В классе моей мечты на каждом столе были бы компьютеры. В классе была бы хорошая и удобная новая мебель. Зимой в классе было бы тепло. В классе было бы много растений. На стене была бы 'умная доска'. Дети и учителя были бы добрые и вежливые. Они были бы умными и уважали друг друга. Это класс моей мечты.