Как читается правильно? hello, my name's varya and i'm 9. i' m in year 3 at school.i like art and music, but my favourite subject is pe.what about you? varya

Хэллоу,май нэйм ис Варя энд айм найн.
Айм ин иер три эт скул.Ай лайк арт энд мюзик,бат май фаворайт сабджект ис Пи-И.Уат эбаут ю?Варя

Хэллоу,Май нэймс Варя энд айм найн.Айм ин еар (three) эт скул .Ай лайк Арт энд Мьюзик ,бат май фэйворит сабджект им ПиИ .Ват эбаут ю?
Варя

Dear penpal,
thanks for you last letter! i'm sorry i haven't written so long,but i haven't got any free time.
well,in your letter you told me about christmas in england. it is very interesting,i think. thank you so much for the invitation, I really appreciate it,but I’m afraid I’m not able to come,I’ve got too much on at the moment. but i hope,that i will celebrate this holiday with you next year.
So, i have to go now,i have promised my mom to help her with the housework. hope to hear from you soon!
yours,
penpal.

Dear penpal,
thanks for you last letter! i'm sorry i haven't written so long,but i haven't got any free time.
well,in your letter you told me about christmas in england. it is very interesting,i think. thank you so much for the invitation, I really appreciate it,but I’m afraid I’m not able to come,I’ve got too much on at the moment. but i hope,that i will celebrate this holiday with you next year.
So, i have to go now,i have promised my mom to help her with the housework. hope to hear from you soon!
yours,
penpal.