1.3.5. write a short story (5-7 sentences) about your school life. my school life по приколу сделайте)

I spent first ten years of my childhood in a small and beautiful village. My grandfather enrolled my name in the village Primary School when I was five. A school was a totally new concept for me. On its first day I was afraid. My heart was throbbing. But when I found the school to be nice I liked it. Our teacher was very kind and loving to us. He used to tell us stories and teach through them. There my education began. There I learnt 'my first A.B.C. and began a joyful period in my life. Meanwhile my father got a job in the city. We shifted there. I started going the high school. I come from a rural background. So I became a laughing stock for some days at the beginning. But I proved my capacities within some days and caught attention of my teachers. 

Let me tell you about my hobbies! My favourite type of music is rock. I don't play any musical instrument, but I like to listen to music. And I sing well. All my friends are fond of rock music, too. Our dream is to form a rock band and to invite you all to our conert. My hobby is looking after my pets. I have lots of them One of my relatives wanted to get rid of his goldfish. Now they live in my flat. But one of my favourite pets is a little hamster. It was sick when I took him from my friend. Now it's fine. And it gets along/on with all other pets.

Let me tell you  my hobbies!
My favourite type of music is rock.
OK, I don't play any musical instrument, but I like to listen to music.
 And I sing well.
All my friends are fond of rock music, too.
Our dream is to from a rock band and to invite you all to our conert.
My hobby is looking after my pets
I have lots of them: a dog, a cat, a tortoise, a white mouse, a parrot.
One of my relatives wanted to get rid his goldfish.
Now they live in my flat.
 But one of  my favorite pets is a little hamster.
 It was sick when I took him from my friend. Now it's fine.
And it gets along with all other pets.

Там может быть несколько ошибок, потому что я сама сейчас немного занята. Но большинство должно быть верно.