Сочинение о своем любимом дне (на , коротко)

My favorite day .
Му favorite day is the first day of autum.In this day i went to school.I met my friends.I first saw our class.Most of all i liked to give flovers to our teacher .
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Мой любимый день.
Мой любимый день первый день осени.В этот день я пошёл(пошла) в школу.Я познакомилась (познакомился) с моими друзьями. Я первый раз увидел(увидела) наш класс.Больше всего мне понравилось дарить цветы нашей учительнице.

i usually wear a black hoodie, black jeans and white trainers. Sometimes i wear a sports suit for my PE lessons. I'm choose what to wear for myself but sometimes my mum help me to choose. I prefer casual style for everyday and something bright for parties. Because i want to shine like a star at parties! I wear my lovely bright dress, heels and i think it's perfect! I love parties! I like simple colours for school, not so colorful. I like school uniform, but it's not for me. I like simple comfortable clothes. At elementary school i usually wearing a school uniform like a skirt blouse and shoes, but when I grew up, I chose to wear comfortable clothes that I like. My mum says: "You need to wear a school uniform", but i like wearing what i want.

Kim Jisu Born on January 3, 1995 in Kunpo, Kyunggi Province, South Korea. She has an older brother and sister[1][2].
The girl graduated from Yongho Middle School.
She became an intern at the South Korean record company YG Entertainment in 2011. On May 4, 2012, YG Entertainment presented her photo in the teaser series "Who's that Girl???". Her name remained unknown for a long time until the agency itself reported that the girl in the photo was Kim Jisu.
On January 15 and January 19, 2013, YG Entertainment again published photos of Jisu, and also announced that the debut of the new women's group Pink Punk was scheduled for the first half of 2013, but the debut was canceled.
On October 20, 2014, Epik High's "Spoiler" video featuring Jisu was released, which was the beginning of her popularity. A little more than a month later, and on November 17, 2014, Hi Suhyun's video "I'm Different" was released, where Jisu starred as a girl of rapper Bobby Kim
In 2016, Jisu starred in the drama "Producer" (4, 5 and 12 episodes).