Как правильно? i from in kazakhstan, specifically in almaty city. правильно ли построенное предложение?

I am from Almaty, Kazakhstan.

I am from Kazakhstan, specifically in Almaty city.

Summer is a beautiful time.
My vacation was by no means boring. Perhaps it was the brightest and unforgettable in my life. At least this vacation has definitely left a mark on my memory. I will tell you about some moments of my holiday.

First of all, my way lay in the village of Valdai, at a local recreation center. In the family circle, I finally had a chance to retire with nature (although mosquitoes were superfluous) and really relax. A lot of fun and interesting activities waited for me there. I made a lot of photos.

After my return for some time I was at home, but this period of time did not let me be bored. I practiced writing pictures and greatly improved my skills.

They did not let me finish the next picture, as I set out on a new journey. This time to the camp. He surprisingly surpassed all my expectations and made me believe that there is a place where dreams come true. There I and a group of guys tried themselves in the role of a photographer, and a few more guys in the areas of other professions. This is the peculiarity of the camp. Thanks to our teacher, I learned a lot of new things and learned the basics of photography. Moreover, it was incredibly fun and interesting. I certainly will not forget this trip.

I do not have time to return to the city, as I am leaving for another vacation. By car, together with my mother and father, we drove a total of more than 4000 km, having made a route from St. Petersburg to Krasnodar. We spent the night in hotels and early in the morning again set off. So it did not last long.

Having reached the destination point, we arrived at the Black Sea, in Gelendzhik. Sea breeze. Embankment. Hotel. The sun. Beach. Beauty! There we properly gathered strength and saturate the sun, before the difficult academic year and labor week.

On the way back we stopped in Moscow, Peter, Voronezh and many more different villages, a guest from relatives. There is nothing better than spending an evening with the family, telling various stories from life.

A week later I was in my hometown, praying that during my visit the school suddenly disappeared, exploded or her legs grew. But no, the school remained there, in its former place. It's a pity. Well, now is the time to tackle your head and go gnawing the granite of science.

Everybody likes summer holidays. So do I.I always have a lot of fun in summer.My parents and I went to the seaside.We stayed in a hotel.It was 5 minutes walk from the beach.Every morning we went to the beach when there wasn't a storm.I swam a lot.I made new friends there.We often played volleyball on the beach and bathed together.My dad often joined us when we played with a ball in the sea.It was fantastic! I spent the rest of my holidays in my grandparents' country house.It was not worse than holidays at the sea.I met my friends there.We rode bikes,sunbathed on the river bank,swam in the river and communicated with each other.I wish holidays were all year round!