Сократить рассказ для пересказа. вот текст: dear helen, i had a great time on holiday, in july my family and i were near snowdon.jy we were walking up the mountain? from morning till lunch. .t was not easy, /but it was exciting! last week we went sightseeing to york. we went to an old castle. /'they say there are ghosts in the castle, but we didn't see any. my friend had been there before, and she hadn't seen them either. august the weather was fine. i went sunbathing and swam a took many fantastic photos. i'll send you some. i am looking forward to' seeing you again, mandy

Можешь убрать but it was exiting
Можешь так же написать:I went sunbathing and swam

Ben has a great deal of his favourite things. All of them are precious for him. But the most favourite one is his, It is black and small phone. He can do what he wants with it, He can call his friends and watch the videos. He can take photos and entertain himsef with it. He is so delighted to have this phone!

Там, наверное, пропущенные слова были, а если перевод нужен, то вот

У Бена много любимых вещей. Все они ему очень дороги. Но самый любимый - его телефон, черный и маленький. Он может делать с этим все, что хочет, он может звонить своим друзьям и смотреть видео. Он может фотографировать и развлекать себя этим. Он так счастлив, что у него есть этот телефон!

В правом верхнем углу по порядку пишешь Flat № (и номер своей квартиры), строчкой ниже номер дома, улицу (37, Energeticov street) строчкой ниже  город, индекс (Moscow, 555555) ДВУМЯ строчками ниже число (25 October, 2015) далее пропускаешь 2 строчки и слева с красной строки пишешь
   Dear Stan,
Thank you for your letteк. It was so great to hear from you. I`m so sorry I haven`t answer you earlier but I was very busy.
  (красная строка) You asked me about getting a pet. Wow, it`s so cool! Of course, you should have pet. I think, you should get a cat, `cause it`s the most quiet animals and they don`t have to be walked. In my opinion, you should get pet from an animal shelter. There`re too many homeless animals there. I take care of my pet. I feed it, clean up after it. 
 ( Красная строка) Well, it`s time to do my homework. Looking forward to your reply.
(красная строка) Best wishes,
(кр. строка)   Derek.