Переведите предложение на в правильном времени , но без переводчика я думаю, что дети в нашей стране переходят в другие школы, когда не находят общий язык с коллективом

I think that children in our country move to other schools when they do not find a common language with the team
Я перевел с словаря

I liked the first day at school. First we went to the line devoted to the day of knowledge. Then we went to the classroom. There I saw that we have many new students. I met some of them on the first day. I think that we have a good class. It has the majority of the same people as last year. I was delighted when I found out that I would not have any objects I did not like. Most of all, I was disappointed that our best friend and I are now in different classes. But nevertheless, the day went well.

We went to the zoo last Saturday with my family. There are different animals: elephants, polar bears, foxes, monkeys in the zoo. We took some bread and feed the geese in the pond. Then we went to a cafe and had dinner there. It was fun and interesting. It was my best day.
мы ходили взоопарк в субботу вместе с моей семьей. Там были разных животные: слона, белого медведя, лису,  обезьян в зоопарке. Мы взяли немного хлеба и  кормили гусей в пруду.  Потом мы пошли в кафе и имели обед там. Было весело и интересно . Это был мой лучший день.