Правильно ли я написал сочинение? > i want to tell you my summer holidays. in june i stayed at home and my parents were at work. but i was glad because at last i had time for myself. i listened to music and wached films. then i spent two weeks in the summer camp on the seaside. every day we enjoyed something special - games, carnivals, competitions, perfomances. there we swam , bathed in the sun, played volleyball on the beach, made sculptures of sand. then my parents were on vacation and so they took me to my parent`s place in the village. i was happy to see my grandmother and grandfather. in the evening i usually helped in the garden. last mounth of the summer i was at home again. i did usual things and prepared for school. i like my summer holidays.

I want to tell you about my summer holidays. In June I stayed at home, and my parents were at work. But I was glad because I finally had time for myself. I listened to music and watched films. Then I spent two weeks in the summer camp on the seashore. Every day we enjoyed something special like games, carnivals, competitions, performances. There we swam, bathed in the sun, played volleyball on the beach, and made sculptures of sand. Then my parents were on vacation so, they took me to my parent`s place in the village. I was happy to see my grandmother and grandfather. In the evening I usually helped in the garden. Last month of the summer I was at home again. I did the usual things and prepared for school. I like my summer holidays.

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Ну, во-первых полиция уже.
Работа органов правопорядка очень опасна. Каждый день, уходя на работу, человек рискует своей жизнью. На работе у него не одно дело и не два, а гораздо больше. Каждый полицейский, ведя уголовное дело, ставит пол угрозу не только свою жизнь, но и жизнь своих близких. Если семья потеряет отца (если он полицейский) то она останется без кормилица. Также эта работа отнимает много времени. Если и есть более сложная профессия, то эта отнимает ещё и нервы. Человек устаёт не только физически, но и морально.

I have no favorite city  probably because I don't like to travel. love to be at home with my thoughts, books and serials. as strange as may sound, I love my country, my city and I don't want to go anywhere from here. but if I had to travel, I would have gone abroad, to see new cities, customs, meet new people, compare them, to see all the flaws... but still, I would return home, and there I would be better than somewhere in other place. no matter the shortcomings of the people, government and more, because I was born here and I don't care about this country or city other people think, because this is my house, this is the best place on earth.  Я чуть-чуть напутала со знаками препинания. А с текстом,должно быть, все окей