Эссе вы за или против бокса молодых людей

Once upon a time there was a prince, who's name was John. He loved to eat a a lot. So he became very very fat. He wanted to become thin again, but he cant stop eating.. And the king said: "i will give a half of my kingdom to a man who will cure my son." The best doctors came but they did nothing. One day a baker came to a king and sad that he knows what to do. He show a cake with jam. But this jam was spelled, so when the prince will eat it, he will become heathy again. 
Next day he gave a cake to the prince. And the prince was cured!

Давным-давно жил принц. Его звали Джон. Он любил поесть, и поэтому вскоре стал очень-очень толстым. Он хотел похудеть но не мог остановиться поедать все, что ему попадалось на глаза. Тогда король объявил: " Я отдам половину своего королевства тому, кто вылечит моего сына." Лучшие доктора приходили, но ничего не могли сделать. В один день к королю пришел пекарь, и сказал, что знает что делать. Он показал торт с вареньем.Но это варенье было не обычное, а волшебное, и когда принц его съест, он снова станет здоровым. На следующий день он отдал торт принцу. И принц стал здоров!
Я надеюсь Вам понравится, т.к. я ну оочень старался))

Dear Paul,
Thank you for your letter! I'm glad to hear that you've passed your driving test! Congratulations!

I'm sorry I haven't written for such a long time. I've been really busy with my new project. By the way, thank you for your brilliant idea. I really had the best presentation last time. I really appreciated your advice.

As for your question, I think all you have to do is just regular exercises. Don't be lazy and try to find at least 20-30 minutes for your health every day. There is a rule of 30 minutes a day: if you do something at least 30 minutes a day you will have a result at the end of the week. For example, if you read 50 pages during this time, at the end of the week you'll have total of about 350 pages. If we say that we don't have enough time for it (as we usually do) we have 0 result at the end of the week. Besides, they say that it takes 21 days to form a new habit. So all you have to do is to take the bull by the horns and try it for just 3 weeks.

Unfortunately, I need to come back to my project. I hope my advice was helpful.

Hope to hear from you soon.

Take care,
Victor