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Each of us has our own point of  view about rock music. 
Someone likes rock music. Someone prefer another genres of music.
I am a great lover of rock music.
The first concert in my life was a concert given by American nu-metal band Limp Bizkit. It’s difficult for me to point out the brightest moment of the show, because everything, that was happening on stage was great!  Live and powerful music, musicians’ communication with the audience, phrases in Russian.  We were all singing the songs together, taking photos, smiling each other. I
Also  I went to the concerts of other American bands, as Korn and 30 seconds to mars, and I liked it.
For me rock is not just an art form. It’s a hobby, philosophy, psychology, and, as Kurt Cobain said, «it’s simply a conversation of ordinary guys».

I like to walk in the Park. happened with me once. When I was strolling through the Park, I had seen that the man dropped 500 rubles. I lifted up and took them to him. I thought that it is nothing serious. And at the same day they have spent. I have never told anyone. The next day my mother gave me 1000 rubles to the school. But I had lost them. I realized that it was punishment that I didn't give money. I told my mom about that. She told me a very important saying that easy prey, easy and lived