Change the third form into the first form: 1) broken 2)rung 3)begun

broken-brokerung-ring begun-begin

1 Broke
2 Ring
3 Begin

There are 4 parts of the day: morning, afternoon, evening and night.  My favourite part of the day, it's evening! Because of school and my privite teachers i become very tired. In the evening I come home without any though about school or what i should write or do. In the evening I can do all that I want. At first i want to eat, because i havent got a lot of time to eat during the day. Then i can chat with my friend in the internet, to talk with my mother and to discuss my secrets or problems.  Of course i like to talk with my friends on telephone, we should discuss all moments of the day and planned what we will do on weekend. And if i don't know to do, i can sleep and have a good rest. So I like evening.

Hi friend,My name is Dasha.Im YOUR (ошибка) new penfriend. I am from Russia. I (БЕЗ AM -ошибка) live in Voronezh. I’m 25. I’m A (ошибка) web designer. I work for a popular newspaper. It’s called Voronezh Times.My family IS (ошибка) not very big: father, mother, my sister and me. My father is an engineer and my Mum IS (ошибка) a librarian. My sister is fifteen. HER (ошибка) name is Ann. She is at school. We have two pets. I HAVE (ошибка) a dog and my sister has a hamster. I prefer dogs. They are nice.I like reading. My favorite writer is Den Brown. My favorite book IS (ошибка) Da Vinci’s Code. My favorite sport is tennis. My favorite sports star IS (ошибка) Sharapova. She is a good athlete and she is so beautiful! She is like a model!When I AM (ошибка) free, I like singing and dancing. My favorite music is rap and R&B. My favorite pop star is Britney Spears. She is great! At the weekend I like going to cinema with my friends. My favorite film is Pirates of the Caribbean. My favorite film star is Johnny Depp. HE IS (ошибка) great!What music do you like? WHO (ошибка) is your favorite star? Write soon,Dasha

ошибки исправлены и в скобках написано (ОШИБКА). хотя и слово favorite я бы исправила на  favoUrite, но возможен и такой вариант.