Переделайте в Пассивный залог 2. They broke the window last week. 3. We brought books yesterday. 4. He plays tennis every week. 5. She took a photo. 6. You watch TV in the evening.

INGREDIENTS3 apples 1 cup flour1 cup sugar3 eggs 1 pinch salt1/2 teaspoon cinnamon1/2 teaspoon vanilla essence1 tablespoon starchPowdered sugar to taste.Number of servings: 4-6

1) Mix flour, cinnamon, salt and starch in a bowl.
2) Whip the eggs with sugar for 3-4 minutes with an electric wire whisk. The mixture should lighten a little and increase in volume.
3) Continuing to whisk, gradually add the flour mixture into the egg mixture. Whisk until it is a homogeneous mass.
4) Peel the apples and cut them into small cubes.
5) Take a baking dish, flour it lightly and smear with oil. Put the apples in it, and cover with the egg-flour mixture.
6) Аpples should be completely covered with the batter.
7)Put in the oven, preheated to 180 degrees, and bake for 30-40 minutes – depending on the features of your oven. As soon as the apple pie is covered with golden crust, check the readiness of the dishes with a toothpick.

8) Let the apple pie cool down and sprinkle it with powdered sugar. The apple pie can be served.

When I was almost 1 year old - в ед. числе. В этом же предложении, если уж "мои родители говоряТ", тогда "My parents say". Далее, здесь же, не думаю что надо использовать продолженное.
либо так если используем when,
My parents say that when I was almost 1 year old when they gave me pencils and paper for drawing,
I was banging rhytm of the music which I heard lately.
либо так, если не используем:
My parents say that when I was almost 1 year old they gave me pencils and paper for drawing but I banged rhytm of the music which I heard lately.
Because of it - лучше That's why.
I like it because I can do it very well anyway my teachers say it. Это лучше разделить на 2: I like it because I can do it very well. At least my teachers say it.

Ещё подумаю, наверняка не всё))