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A report on the condition of the rooms in the University. Recommendations for the improvement of living conditions.introduction.The condition of the Dorm rooms meets the needs of students, but there are some wishes to the administration.Security. To improve safety it is necessary to update some equipment in the rooms because faulty appliances can become a threat to the health of students.Facilities To improve comfort of students proposes to replace the bed and put the sofas in the lobby.conclusion I believe that these tips will help to improve the living conditions of students