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If I were offered three days to travel in the USA, I would go to Californian in particular Los Angeles. I would choose to go to LA because I enjoy busy cities and hot temperature, and LA can definitely offer both. It's also one of the most multicultural cities in the world, so I would be able to experience a variety of cultures at once without having to go to different countries. I absolutely love trying new foods, especially Asian cuisine, and because LA has many ethnic quarter like Little Tokyo, Chinatown, Koreatown and the Persian Square, it would be a perfect place to try many dishes in just three days. But LA is not only well-known for its diverse culture but also for Hollywood and Beverly Hills, where you may have a chance to meet famous people. But even if you don't meet any celebrities, LA is still full of beautiful and interesting placed to visit