Correcting your writing (6 points) There is one mistake in each sentence. Use the correction code above to identify the type of mistake. Gr = grammar Sp = spelling ^ = missing word WW = wrong word (vocabulary) WO = word order P = punctuation In most developed countries people are living longer. There a lot more retired people in these countries. These old people is taking government pensions for more years. This very expensive is for the governments. Some governments want to increase the retire age. However many people think this is unkind to the elderly.

Orchid is an exotic and very beatiful flower. It is from warm Thailand, the country of smiles. There are many colours and different types of this flower. A sitting room in my flat is a smal tropical island because there are many orchids in there. My mother is taking care about them. It seems these flowers are blossoming during the whole year. If you pay special attention for shape of orchid you will see a small human with hands and legs. We have these ones in white, rose, blue and bright rose colours. We think this flower brings  the luck and the happiness at our home.

Орхидея экзотический и прекрасный цветок. Он из теплого Таиланда, страны улыбок. Этот цветок бывает разных видов и цветов. Гостиная в моей квартире это маленький тропический остров потому что в ней много орхидей. Моя мама ухаживает за ними. Кажется эти цветы цветут на протяжении всего года. Если вы обратите особое внимание на очертания цветка орхидеи то увидите маленького человечка с руками и ногами. У нас есть цветы белого, розового, синего и ярко розовых цветов. Мы считаем что эти цветы приносят удачу и счастье в наш дом.