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I think I would like to become an astronaut, as it is a very interesting and exciting profession. I would like to visit the moon to see the very footprints on its surface. I think this is a very important profession, it helps to develop science in the knowledge of space. When I was seven years old, I watched the movie Star Wars and I wanted to become an astronaut, as well as travel through space. I think only very brave and smart people can become astronauts. And I would also visit Mars, it seems to me very beautiful there.

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Думаю, я хотел бы стать космонавтом, потому что это очень интересная и увлекательная профессия. Я бы хотел побывать на Луне, чтобы увидеть самые следы на ее поверхности. Я считаю, что это очень важная профессия, она развивать науку в познании космоса. Когда мне было семь лет, я смотрел фильм «Звездные войны» и хотел стать космонавтом, а также путешествовать по космосу. Думаю, космонавтами могут стать только очень смелые и умные люди. А еще я бы побывал на Марсе, мне кажется там очень красиво.

Если поставь

Мy bedroom is very beautiful.it has one soft bed where i sleep.i have some book - shelves in my room.it has one writing  table whele i write my school homework.here i have one computer and tv set.i like read books from my book - shelves.unfortunately i have not got my books of english writers.in rainy days i like look out from my window.rarely i see tv .because i am very busy with my homework.on the window i have white curtains.when i come from the school i hurry to go in my dear bedroom to change my clothes in wardrobe.actually i like my room very much.