Проверьте моё эссе на наличие ошибок.. тема : many people think that the best way to travel is by car. in our worls there are a lot of means of transport.one of them is by car. in this essay i will name some of the advantages and disadvantages of travel by car. the most common argument for is speed, which depend on type of car.i think that is very big advanture.when you travel by car you can look through the window.it's very pleasant prosecc if you like it. in favour of disadvantages i can say that some ptople may have a sick.travel by car is not really my kind of thing, because i have a sick, but it depend on beauty in the car.it sounds stupid but it is true.i can't put up with(терпеть) father's car, when we travel somewhere.i feel headache and sickness.but for my relatives all is good in father's car. evidently(очевидно) that this mean of transport not for all people, but if you like travel by car you have a good impressions from your trip.

in our world there are a lot of means of transport.one of them is a car.

in this essay i will tell you about  the advantages and disadvantages   of traveling by car.

 

the most common argument for this such of travelling is speed, which depends on the type of your (или a car) car. i think that it is a very big advantage. when you travel by car you can look through the window. it's a very pleasant process if you like it.  in favour of   disadvantages i can say that some people may have a car-sick. travelling by car is not really my kind of thing,because i have   a car-sick, but it depends on comfort  of the car. it sounds stupid but it is true. i can't put up with(терпеть) father's car, when we travel somewhere. i feel headache and sickness. but in the car of my relatives i feel much better than in my father's car.evidently (очевидно) that this mean of transport  is not for all people, but if you like to travel by car you'll have a good  impressions from your trip.

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one of them is car.

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Ina karol, perhaps the only young performer of ukraine, uniting in a seemingly incompatible things: the morale of the ukrainian military, peacekeeping, rapid musical career and sincere smile tina graduated from music school for piano. and then the legendary kiev higher music school of rm gliera. however, after an energetic personality tiny led it to air - now a student of the national aviation university and soloist song and dance ensemble armed forces of ukraine. despite the young age she had already won more than 23-s grand prix and the first prizes in various international competitions and festivals. but tina does not just pop singer - she plays on the stage of professional theater, performs leading roles in popular european musical. moreover, with such a busy working schedule, tina time to pursue television, a musical show at one of the best rating of channels of ukraine - this show is designed to help talented children from poor families. tina has participated in 17 concerts a charity festival tour of u.s. cities: new york, philadelphia, dallas, detroit, houston, milwaukee. and 2005 was for the singer's most crowded: russian participation in the ball in london at the royal residence. the victory at the international vocal competition «new wave». also, tina received two popular acceptance: «woman of the year» and «opening of the year». and most importantly: in the same year tina karol held two peacekeeping missions in hot spots of the world - in iraq and kosovo. the singer went to solo concerts to international peacekeeping contingent in baghdad and kut (iraq), where her hands not only ukrainian soldiers, but u.s. and georgian and british. and in kosovo, ukrainian singer was invited to paris charmed her talent for the french peacekeepers. during the speech in the hot spots, defense minister of ukraine handed the singer the public order for the peacekeeping mission. in 2006 she opened the debut album "show me your love". tina karol finished 11 grades of a secondary school, 8 years music school, piano, kiev higher music college. rm gliera, a student of the national aviation university, faculty of management and logistics, correspondence branch. 1996 «spivanochka-dzhazochka» - 3 premium. 1997 «golden trembita» - 1 prize, «young stars prykarpattia» - 1 prize. 1998 «your talents, ukraine» - 1 prize, «sholom, ukraine» - 1 prize. 1999 «christmas meeting with the blues brothers» - 2 award, «black sea games" - 3 prize, «golden talk» - grand prix, «a one star» - 1 prize, the festival «we are your children, ukraine». 2000 took part in 17 concerts in the charity festival on u.s. cities: new york, philadelphia, talas, detroit, houston, milwaukee. 2001 «young galichina» - 2 award, «edelweiss» - 1 prize, «seven cultures» - represented israel. 2002 «first nationwide contest entertainment» - 2 award, «the first nationwide competition of the israeli songs» - 1 prize, the representative of ukraine at the gala concert «finalists». 2003 soloist ensemble song and dance armed forces of ukraine, awarded scholarships state council of ukraine and the gratitude of a measure of kiev, the main female role of the musical «equator» - margaret. 2004 performer of martha-bylica in the play «whit sunday», competition «new york - kiev - tel-aviv» - grand prix winner «miss galichina», musical «assol», the main role, assol (austria ), show «egg horse» - playing the role of karma main character and manage the entire show singing acapello, a participant semifinal contest «eurovision«. 2005 participant russian charity ball in london at the royal residence. work on a solo album. second prize at the international vocal competition in jurmala - «new wave». presented ukraine at the international competition «eurovision-2006» with the song «show me your love» (7 th). won awards «woman of the year», «opening of the year», «man of the year». awarded the national order of the peacekeeping mission, a diploma «golden pen» for his contributionвиберешь то что тебе подходит

Ienjoy reading books very much and most of all i like the book of sherlock holmes stories by arthur conan doyle. the main characters of the stories are a brilliant detective sherlock holmes, who can solve the most complicated cases, and his loyal friend doctor john watson. sherlock holmes always pays attention to every detail and can expose the craftiest criminals. my favourite story is entitled “a scandal in bohemia”. in this story the king of bohemia visited sherlock holmes under an assumed name. he told sherlock that some years ago he had had an affair with an opera singer irene adler. the king was going to get married to a scandinavian princess and he was afraid that irene, who had compromising letters and photographs, could send them to his fiancée’s family. so he wanted sherlock to get them for him. finally, using disguise, holmes got into irene’s house and figured out where the photographs were hidden. but when he wanted to get them, the photographs were not in place. there was a letter from irene and her photograph. she unveiled his plans, but she promised not to use the photographs and letters against the king. so the famous detective was beaten by the clever woman.