Сочинение на тему , , my visit to an art gallery" только 150 ! !

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when i gotto the galleryiliked it very much.many paintingshungon the wall.i carefullylooked intoeach one.the tour guidetold manylegends andtales aboutthese pictures.ilistened very carefully tohim.then iasked a fewinteresting questionsand foundthe answers.i liketo spend timein the gallery.i alsowanted to be atour guide.i couldtell peopleabout the paintingsand theirstories.thenwhen wewent into the room, isaw a veryancienthistory paintingsand books.they were createdlong ago.it was exciting.all myfriends areinterested init.the tour guidewas tellinga veryinteresting and understandable.heinvited usto join theclub of younggallerists.iand several of myfriendsagreed.thenwe went to theotherroom.but i've alreadyforgotten about thepictureandthought about wasthati was calledto the club.the tour endedand the tour guidecalled us.wehave discussedthis topic.iwas very pleased.it was my dream.maybein the future i'llalsowork in agallery,look for interestingfactsand data!

1. he will do an english exercise if he does not have other things to do. 2. if i do not help him, he will not write the test tomorrow. 3. he will not go to the library tonight. 4. if he does not go to the library, it will be at home. 5. we'll be at home tomorrow. 6. if we are at home tomorrow, we will see this program on tv. 7. she will not be at home tomorrow. 8. if she isl not at home tomorrow, leave her a note. 9. tomorrow, the weather will be good. 10. if the weather is good tomorrow, we will go to the country. 11. when she comes to school, she takes off her coat. 12. when she comes to school, she will take off the coat. 13. as soon as he says this funny scene, he starts laughing. 14. as soon as he remembers this funny scene, he starts laughing. 15. i'll come home at six o'clock. 16. when i come home, i'll call you. 17. she will call us in the evening. 18. if she calls you, ask her to bring me the book. 19. i will see tom tomorrow. 20. as soon as i see tom, i'll tell him about it. 21. i will go to paris next week. 22. before i go to paris, i'll call you.

Предложения составлены неправильно, лучше их переформулировать. my favorite day of the week is saturday because there is a lot of free time for me.you don`t need to hurry at all. this is the one day when i wake up later than usually. on saturday i clean up. after cleaning my house i have lunch and then i go out with my friends. my friends and i love playing games and listening to music. and if it`s good weather outside, we take food and have a picnic. at the weekend i wake up and look tv programs. also, i do my homework on sunday night. а последнее предложение я не поняла