Проверьте эссе! ! что добавить, что изменить? nowadays there are a lot of social proplems and workaholism - is one of them. who are they, workaholics? so many people think about this problem, and all of them have their own opinion. from my point of view, it is much better way to be an workaholic in modern world. of course, there are many positive and negative components, pluses and minuses. on the one hand, some people are interested in their job and on work they become much happier. there are a lot of well-known stories, when hard-working person becomes successful, rich and famous. on the other hand, there are many people who dislike their work, but they become workaholics becouse career forses. they depend on their job and spend every minute of the day working, do not have time for anyone else, for example for relatives and friends. it plays a harmful role for organism too: people become more agressive, pessimistic and stressed, relying on coffee and try to keep awake, not enough sleep, eat a poor diet. the risk of having a heart attack increases significantly, as does a chance to get other health problems such as cancer. finally, i can say that so many people, so many minds, but everithing, particulary workaholism, should be in moderation. people should pay attention not only for work, but on their privat-life too.

объяснение:

«друг - это тот, с кем ты можешь побыть наедине, и тебе нечего делать, и ты не можешь придумать, что сказать и чувствовать себя комфортно в тишине». друзья ) .. важны в нашей жизни. я не могу сказать, кто на самом деле идеальный друг. но я думаю, что он должен быть честным и поддерживающим. идеальный друг - это друг, который всегда пытается вас понять и хранит ваши секреты. друг не должен быть умным, но у друзей должны быть схожие интересы. если у вас неприятности, вам всегда идеальный друг. вы можете положиться на него. ему не нужно иметь деньги, но важно, чтобы с ним было весело. друзья должны быть верными и никогда не предавать друг друга. вы счастливы, если у вас есть идеальный друг. у меня есть лучшие друзья: имя * я не могу сказать, что они идеальны, но я тоже не идеален. мы часто обсуждаем наши проблемы и вместе смеемся. я могу доверять им, а они доверяют мне. мне повезло иметь таких друзей.

many people want to lose weight, but they don't know how to lose it. i know some methods how to lose weight.

1) stop to eat fat food. fat food can be fast food, or fried chicken or etc. if you want to lose wight you must stop to eat it, or eat it one time for month.

2) you must to drink water. stop to drink juices, they have much calories. water can help you to lose weight and feel much better.

3) do sport exercises. run or cycling or etc kind of sports help you lose weight, stay stronger and feel better too

4) eat more vegetables and fruits. they have much vitamins and you can lose weight and be stronger.

that's all and if you want to lose weight remember this rules and you'll do it!