Проверьте ! прошу ! ! нужна твоя в .ты всё-таки лучше меня в нём в 100500 раз)) просмотри моё сочинение-описание семье, может найдёшь ошибки грубые какие-нибудь ! .и скажи как оно вообще. my family my family for me is my fortress! my family is most important to me! in my family, i feel warm and cozy, because i’m surrounded by people dear for me: my mother , father , older brother , still living with us our beloved cat. my mom is of medium height, she has got short dark hair, mammy likes to collect hair a ponytails. she has got expressive green eyes , tender hands , has the most sincere smile and gentle voice. she dresses stylishly. i very much love my mother, she is the most expensive for me person on the ground ! mom is also my best friend. i admire my father for his strong characters. my father medium height .he is full. he has got strong black hair , gray eyes , strong hands and serious look. my dad is the best ! with any problems i turn to him , he understands me and helps. my brother is older than me for twelve years. he was always close and looked after me. addition , he is the most fun in our family. he has got blonde hair and green eyes . hi is tall. next to him , i feel protected . my cat is very fat and kind. he has got orange eyes , gray wool and long ears. his legs are small and with large claws. most of all my cat likes to sleep. as for me, i have got blue eyes , brown short hair, pale face and i have high forehead. i am of average height . i can not imagine myself without my family because they are my everything ! my family is my happiness.