Составить небольшое сочинение на языке на тему "как я провожу свой день" ( начиная с самого утра, далее учеба в колледже и концовка чем кончаеться мой день заранее !

i get up at half past seven. i have a shower, i have breakfast, get dressed, take my bag and go the college. the lessons starts at half past eight. every day i usually have 5 or 6 lessons. after the 3rd lesson i go the canteen and have a dinner. my lessons finish at about 3. when i am at home first i do my homework. then i communicate with my friends in the internet. if the weather is fine i go for a walk with my friends. in the evening we usually have a supper at 7. after supper i watch tv or play computer games. i go to bed at 10. 

Америкос отвечает : there are many different ways that the computer changed things and  the lives of people. some people might say that it changed the world because now people can communicate with other people much more easily than writing a letter to them and having them write back to you. but the real information, according to the point of view of many americans is that we can find information on what's going on in the world or information for a paper that we have to write for school. now that the computer and more specifically, the internet have been introduced to the world it has made getting information much easier than it used to be. when computers were not introduced yet, people had to go to libraries and search through encyclopedias and find out the information by doing that much work. now it is easier and much more efficient to find the information that you need to find out about the world and other information that is needed to know.

Неплохо! так, мелкие улучшения - порядок слов и забыли кое-где глаголы поставить. пишу с телефона, поэтому весь ваш текст не сумел скопировать, внизу - предложения и фразы, требующие улучшения. how will he celebrate? - how will you celebrate it? and you have made the menu? - have you made the menu? little help from the teacher - there is little help from the also on christmas in school, be disco an a competition - also for christmas in school, there will be a disco (тж. можно сказать dance), and a competition. (какой конкурс, конкурс чего? например, cooking competition) all were going - everybody was going come to join us with my class is very fun - it's fun with my class. have the best idea.