Опишите как вы совершаете покупки. на . и перевод. надо

I like to go shopping very much. I even think that its my hobby. Shopping is very good idea if you want to relax. I go in most popular supermarket in ma city with my friends and begin buying. i try to choose not so expensive things. i dont like waste my pocket money. if i havent got enough noney i go a window shopping.
я люблю совершать покупки . я даже думаю это мое хобби. шоппинг это хорошая идея если вы хотите расслабиться. я иду в популярный супепмаркет со своими друзьями и начинаю покупки. я стараюсь не выбирать дорогие вещи. я не хочу напрасно тратить мои корманные деньги. если у меня нет вообще денег я могу отправится в "виндов шоппинг"(смотреть на ветрины но не покупать. например просто мерить одежду, потом когда будет достаточно денег, можно приобрести)

То, что выделено жирным - убрать. То, что жирным и курсивом - вставить ))) Плохо, что тут зачёркивания нет, было бы понятней.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am interested in becoming a volunteer in (я бы написала of и поставила артикль the) Education International and I would be grateful if you could give me (используй supply вместо give me - звучит лучше) some (не нужно здесь some) further information on the following.
First of all, I would appreciate it if you could tell me in any what particular place locality I will be working in. Could you also let me know young people of what age you are looking for. what age you look for young people? I would also like to know what subjects need to be taught. Furthermore, I am interested would like to clarify what is included in into free accommodation. Finally, could you tell me how much will I earn? I will learn.
Thank you in advance for your assistance. I look forward to your reply.
Yours faithfully,

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>Are they still having lunch? - No, they have already finished.

>Her shoes are clean. She has cleaned her shoes.

>They are now in bed. They have just gone to bed.

>I have been to Paris twice.

>He made a few purchases.

>He has done some shopping.

>Someone has broken the shop window.

>Tim has taken my umbrella.

>Do you want to read this newspaper? - No, thank you. I have read it already.

>Carol has bought a new camera.

>They have been to Venice a few times.

>He has gone to London.

>I have met this man before.

>I have seen this film before.

>He has helped me a lot.

>The Browns have moved into a new flat.

>Someone has taken my textbook by mistake.

>I have been to the zoo before.