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olga asked what they were doing there.

emily answered that they had been visiting her friend jane. then she asked, what olga was doing there as well.olga anwered that one of the doctors, whom she had known for ages, had phoned her and asked for help.mark asked what had happened? olga anwered that a russian lady and her son had come to the hospital that morning. the boy was very ill, but he and his mother couldn't explain anything. she had to come to translate for them.misha said that he could help too.rob added that they all would go.olga thanked them, but she didn't think that it was a good idea. she couldn't take them all with her.emily said that the grandma was right. she said that misha could go with her and that they all could wait there.  

Dear tom greetings from russia! my favorite local restourant is "shashlik ot shota", they serve caucasian cusine and russian cusine there, i love to eat some grilled meat with bottle of wine there. i think they need to start advertizing campaing to increase their popularity, they could use "once ashot, always ashot" slogan in marketing campain. what kind of meal of georgian cusine whould you like to eatn, tom? how deep fried stake whould you like - well done or rare? do you like fried kikes? best regards vladimir