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The Perfect Crime
Sentence was passed and in that moment my whole life completely changed. In the background, you could hear the people chant, "Justice has finally been served!" They don't know me I thought. Everybody makes mistakes, right? But, where was my second chance in life. My luck, the death penalty became legal again and eagerly waiting for me to become its newest member. My palms grew sweaty as always when I grew nervous and scared. There was nothing I could do. These people wanted me to pay for what I put them through.
You're probably wondering what I did. Well, where do I start? Let me begin on the day my little brain came up with this supposedly brilliant idea. It was on a summer's afternoon and the sun was gleaming directly against my face as though it was ready to burn me to a crisp. I blocked it with my right hand but then something else caught my attention. Three men in ski masks held large rifles in one hand and in the other bags of what I assumed to be loads of money. They ran out of the National Bank and jumped into a beat up van, drove off only leaving smoke behind them. Somehow I was able to read the license and memorized it. The usual citizen would have reported it to the police but I decided on a different approach.

1. Tom is in his room. He plays the piano. (wrong) – He is playing the piano
2. Jill is speaking five languages. (wrong) - Jill speaks five languages.
3. I am looking for my glasses. Where are they? (right)
4. My brother is smoking 20 cigarettes a day. (wrong) - My brother smokes 20 cigarettes a day.
5. I am not understanding what he is speaking about. (wrong) - I do not understand what he is speaking about.
6. John is tired, so he has a short sleep. (wrong) - John is tired, so he is having a short sleep.
7. The man in the dark grey coat is looking like Tom Garrett. (wrong) - The man in the dark grey coat looks like Tom Garrett.
8. He doesn’t like ballroom dancing. (right)
9. I am looking out of the window, but I’m not seeing him. (wrong) - I am looking out of the window, but I can't (или don't) see him.
10. I am remembering that holiday we had in France a few years ago. (wrong) - I remember that holiday we had in France a few years ago.
11. How much is it costing to send a letter to Paris? (wrong) How much does it cost to send a letter to Paris?
12. My parents are never drinking strong coffee. (wrong) - My parents never drink strong coffee.
13. I hate big cities. (right)
14. What are you thinking of that novel? (wrong) What do you think of that novel?
15. What are you thinking about? (right)
16. I am hoping Magi comes out of the hospital soon. (wrong) - I hope Magi come out of the hospital soon.

1. Tom is in his room. He plays the piano. (wrong) – He is playing the piano
2. Jill is speaking five languages. (wrong) - Jill speaks five languages.
3. I am looking for my glasses. Where are they? (right)
4. My brother is smoking 20 cigarettes a day. (wrong) - My brother smokes 20 cigarettes a day.
5. I am not understanding what he is speaking about. (wrong) - I do not understand what he is speaking about.
6. John is tired, so he has a short sleep. (wrong) - John is tired, so he is having a short sleep.
7. The man in the dark grey coat is looking like Tom Garrett. (wrong) - The man in the dark grey coat looks like Tom Garrett.
8. He doesn’t like ballroom dancing. (right)
9. I am looking out of the window, but I’m not seeing him. (wrong) - I am looking out of the window, but I can't (или don't) see him.
10. I am remembering that holiday we had in France a few years ago. (wrong) - I remember that holiday we had in France a few years ago.
11. How much is it costing to send a letter to Paris? (wrong) How much does it cost to send a letter to Paris?
12. My parents are never drinking strong coffee. (wrong) - My parents never drink strong coffee.
13. I hate big cities. (right)
14. What are you thinking of that novel? (wrong) What do you think of that novel?
15. What are you thinking about? (right)
16. I am hoping Magi comes out of the hospital soon. (wrong) - I hope Magi come out of the hospital soon.