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Dear Dima,
Thanks for your letter. How are you? I'm fine.
I have recently got a nice present for my birthday. Guess what it is. It's a parrot. His name is Kesha. In general parrots are very smart and interesting birds. It's fun to watch them. Some of the parrots can talk. Parrots usually feed on seeds, nuts, grain, berries and soft fruit. My parrot can eat all this and also some other food. My parrot likes to look at the mirror at itself. I love to play with Kesha, especially when he flies around the room.I love my pet!! And he loves me, too. Have you got any pets? What can they do? 
Keep in touch.
Best wishes,
Olga

Dear Ben,

i am very much happy to see your response! how are you guys doing over there?

i am so glad you all are flying out to Spain. i have always dreamt of visiting it.

this upcoming summer me and my family are planning to going on vacation to Canada. i am very excited about it. i love traveling in general. learning about new cultures, meeting new people, discovering new food, seeing different architecture: this is so fascinating to me.

how about you, Ben? what is your favorite part about traveling? how do you pack? what are your tips on how to be financially efficient while visiting new places?

i am looking forward to seeing your message!

sincerely,

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