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A lot of people think that working after school is a great idea, but some people think differently. Let us discuss.
In my opinion, working after school is an unforgettable experience for a student, because such activity makes us more responsible. In addition, it is a cool chance to realise a bit adult life. Part-time job depends on interests of teenagers and opportunites.
However, others consider in another way. They think that teenager can pay too much attention to the part-time job and they can make their studying get worse.
Nevertheless, I strongly believe that if parents and teachers would motivate teenagers and I think pupils should realise that studying at school much more important than part-time job, because later they would leave that job for studying somewhere for the future real job.
To sum up, as you see, as one wise english proverb says: as many people as many minds, that is why only you can choose what is up to you.