Проверьте правильно я составила предложение? есть ошибки? i would like to tell you about my holidays in sochi which was the worst in my travel experience.

т.к. holidays- множ.число, то нужно употребить не was, a were, а все остальное, по-моему правильно: ) или изменить holidays на holiday

 

 

1.-the police aroused? is it caused ten minutes ago. 2. that crazy idea! just don't tell anyone, but the above you will laugh. 3. dictionary hornby often refer. 4. professor was sure a lecture about slang of adolescents will listen carefully. 5. on the last film festival much to say. 6. good for the boy are looked after in kindergarten? 7. the garden was magnificent. he always paid a lot of attention. 8. if your doctor send now, it will be here not earlier than one hour. 9. over his jokes always laugh. 10. looking for the key, but so far without success. 11. talk to him and he understood everything. 12. he tried to impress but its just not noticed.(или так)

1. if you ring me up, i will tell you something. если ты мне позвонишь, я кое-что тебе расскажу. if you rang me up, i would tell you something. если б ты мне (вдруг) позвонил, я   бы тебе кое-что рассказал. if you had rung me up (yesterday), i would have told you something. если бы ты мне позвонил (вчера), я бы тебе тогда рассказал кое-что. 2 if you give more attention to your child, he will be able to study better at school. если вы будете уделять ребёнку больше внимания, он сможет лучше учиться в школе. if you gave more attention to your child, he would be able если бы вы больше ("а вы не уделяете! ")  он мог бы if you had given more attention to your child (last year), he could have studied better at school. если бы вы больше уделяли внимания ребёнку (в прошлом году), он бы мог лучше учиться тогда. 3 if it isn't raining now, we will go to the country. если сейчас не будет дождя, мы поедем в деревню. if it wasn't raining now, we would go to the country. если бы сейчас не шёл дождь, мы бы поехали на дачу. if it hadn't been raining (last weekend), we would have gone to the country. если бы не  дождь, мы бы уехали загород (на прошлых выходных).